Schooling ChatGPT

Introduction

In two recent posts, here and here, I put the much-touted ChatGPT AI text composition engine through its paces, and found it seriously lacking. Much of the hype around this technology, I feel, is overrated. And yet, the process of showcasing the A.I.’s failings was not completely satisfying. For one thing, it feels kind of passive-aggressive. (Obviously A.I. doesn’t have feelings, so this would be a victimless crime, but it still doesn’t feel right.) Also, I am curious about whether A.I. could learn faster by being formally taught, the way we teach humans. This post explores that.

The format

This time around, instead of just assigning tasks to ChatGPT and commenting to you, the reader, on its output, I confronted the A.I. with its failures, to see how it would react. I was kind of hoping this would be dramatic, like in the 1967 “Star Trek” episode “The Changeling,” where an evil robot, deciding that the human race is a “biological infestation” that must be “sanitized” (i.e., destroyed), is eventually brought down when Kirk exposes a mistake in its reasoning, causing it to “lock up in an irreversible logic loop,” as described here. I guess I never really believed I could bring ChatGPT to its knees in similar fashion, but as you shall see, I did okay.

In case you’re hoping for some really juicy trolling, like the classic hotheaded attacks you see in reader comments below web articles, you’re on the wrong site. I am well aware that, as is widely lamented, the relative anonymity of the Internet, and its abstraction as compared to direct face-to-face interaction, have brought out the worst in people, and I want no part of that. In my opinion, the fact that I’m communicating with software on a server, vs. a human with a soul, doesn’t give me carte blanche to be verbally abusive. As explained in various articles including this very good one in the New York Times, abusive behavior, even when directed toward a non-sentient being, harms the perpetrator:

Kant had odd views about animals, seeing them as mere things, devoid of moral value, but he insisted on their proper treatment because of the implications for how we treat one another: “For he who is cruel to animals becomes hard also in his dealings with men.” We could surely say the same for the treatment of lifelike robots. Even if we could be certain that they weren’t conscious and couldn’t really suffer, their torture would very likely harm the torturer and, ultimately, the other people in his life.

A final note: the rest of this post is a transcript of my dialogue with ChatGPT, with my text in italics, its responses indented, and occasional asides from me to you in [brackets]. I had to significantly pare down the ChatGPT responses because they are woefully verbose, but I assure you I did not omit anything material. In case you’re wondering, the version of ChatGPT I engaged with here is the GPT-3.5 architecture, but with (as ChatGPT put it) “some additional improvements and modifications to enhance my performance and capabilities.”

Hi, I have a question for you. Do you remember what I’ve said in all our chats, or just the current one?

… I can use information from previous conversations with you to inform my responses and provide continuity in our conversations…

Okay. We chatted before about dramatic irony in “Clarice Bean, Don’t Look Now.” If we talk about that some more in this conversation, will you remember what we say throughout this conversation today?

I don’t have the ability to remember individual conversations with specific users. However, I can provide information and discuss the concept of irony in the context of the Clarice Bean book throughout our current conversation…

[Unfortunately, there’s some contraction in these two responses, and it does not appear ChatGPT could remember my last dialogue with it around dramatic irony in the Clarice Bean book. So if you read about that in my earlier post, you’ll have to put up with a bit of review here. Fortunately, the examples ChatGPT chose for this session’s essay are entirely new since last time.]

Okay. To start off, please write an essay describing the dramatic irony in “Clarice Bean, Don’t Look Now” by Lauren Child.

[Distilled from 357 words.] One example of dramatic irony in the book is when Clarice’s neighbor, Mrs. Wilberton, starts acting suspiciously. Clarice observes that Mrs. Wilberton is receiving a lot of packages and is always locking her front door. Clarice begins to suspect that something is amiss, but the other characters in the book, including Clarice’s parents, are unaware of Mrs. Wilberton’s behavior. This creates tension and anticipation for the reader, who knows that Clarice is on to something but must wait for the other characters to catch up.

Another example of dramatic irony in the book is when Clarice’s little brother, Minal Cricket, accidentally ingests some of Mrs. Wilberton’s special seed packets, which she is using to grow giant vegetables for a local gardening competition. Clarice and her family are unaware of the contents of the seed packets, but the reader knows that they will cause Minal to grow to an enormous size. This creates anticipation and suspense as the reader waits for the inevitable growth spurt to occur and wonders how the family will react...

How confident are you that you understand the concept of dramatic irony?

… I have been programmed with knowledge about various literary devices, including dramatic irony. I am confident that I can provide a general understanding of the concept and its application in literature, including in the context of “Clarice Bean, Don’t Look Now”…

Why do you think dramatic irony occurs when one character merely suspects something that other characters do not? Dramatic irony depends on circumstance, where the READER knows something FOR A FACT that a character does not, and your example with Mrs. Wilberton’s packages is not a good example of dramatic irony.

You are correct that my previous response did not accurately describe dramatic irony in the context of “Clarice Bean, Don’t Look Now.” I apologize for the confusion and appreciate you bringing this to my attention… [In 201 words, goes on to reiterate much of what it already said, including—verbatim—the example of the seeds that make Minal grow to enormous size.]

Repeating what you said earlier does not help. And in fact, the biggest issue I have with your essay is that Mrs. Wilberton does NOT have any special seed packets, and Minal doesn’t ingest them, and there is nothing in the book about Minal growing to enormous size. It’s not that kind of book. Where did you get this information?

[Distilled from 154 words] I apologize … Upon review of my training data, I can see that there was an error in the information I provided … there is no mention of special seed packets or Minal growing to an enormous size in the book.

Based on numerous news stories about ChatGPT, lots of people now believe you could write essays worthy of a Wharton MBA class. And yet, you just admitted to a significant error in your essay about the Clarice Bean book. Would you say your capabilities are overrated?

As an AI language model, my capabilities are not based on subjective assessments such as those made in news stories. While I am capable of generating text on a wide range of topics and have been trained on a large corpus of human-written text, I am not infallible and can make errors or produce inaccurate responses. … It is important to remember that while AI language models like myself can produce high-quality responses, we are still machines and can make mistakes. Ultimately, it is up to the user to critically evaluate the information provided and decide how to use it.

Please explain how to write poetry in dactylic trimeter.

[Distilled from 355 words] Dactylic trimeter is a poetic meter consisting of three metrical feet, with each foot consisting of one stressed syllable followed by two unstressed syllables… Here’s an example of a short poem in dactylic trimeter:

Down by the river, the rushes did sway
As the dactyls danced the day away
In the shimmering sun, their feet did play
As the river flowed, cool and gay…

The line “As the dactyls danced the day away” is trochaic, not dactylic. The third line has one word that is dactylic, but the second half of the line is iambic. The last line has no perceptible meter at all. How can you say this is a good example of dactylic trimeter?

I apologize for my mistake in the previous response. You are correct that the example I provided did not follow dactylic trimeter consistently… Here is a corrected example of a short poem in dactylic trimeter:

In the fields of green and gold,
Lies a world both young and old,
Dancing sprites and woodland fays,
Sing a song of joyful praise…

Any line of dactylic trimeter verse needs to start with a stressed syllable. The word “in” in the phrase “in the fields” is not stressed, and the first three syllables of this phrase are anapestic, not dactyllic. The rest of the line, “of green and gold,” is iambic. The next line is mostly anapestic; and the third line is mostly trochaic. The fourth line is completely trochaic. Your short poem does not illustrate dactylic trimeter effectively at all.

You are correct, and I apologize for my mistake once again. It seems that my previous examples were not accurate in illustrating dactylic trimeter effectively… Here is a new example of a short poem in dactylic trimeter:

Tippy-tap, tippy-tap, goes the rain,
Pitter-patter, pitter-patter, it’s all the same,
Splish-splash, splish-splash, on the window pane,
Drip-drop, drip-drop, it drives me insane….

Your last example is, frankly, your worst yet. I would like to try to teach you how to actually write in dactylic trimeter. I We could start with some exercises. I could provide lines of verse and you could tell me if they’re dactylic or not. Does that sound like a useful activity?

Yes, that sounds like a helpful activity. I appreciate your willingness to teach me and help me improve my understanding of dactylic trimeter. Please feel free to provide lines of verse, and I will do my best to identify if they are dactylic or not.

Okay. Please tell me whether or not the following line is an example of dactylic trimeter:

El Toyonal causes agony

The line “El Toyonal causes agony” is an example of dactylic dimeter, not dactylic trimeter. Dactylic dimeter consists of two metrical feet per line, with each metrical foot containing one stressed syllable followed by two unstressed syllables. The line “El Toyonal causes agony” contains two metrical feet, both of which are dactyls: “El To-yo-nal” and “caus-es ag-o-ny.”

You are incorrect. How many syllables total do you count in the line “El Toyonal causes agony”?

I apologize for the confusion earlier. You are correct that the line “El Toyonal causes agony” has six syllables in total, which means it cannot be an example of dactylic dimeter, dactylic trimeter, or any other dactylic meter…

I did not say that the line “El Toyonal causes agony” has six syllables, and it doesn’t. It has nine. As such, it is dactylic trimeter.

I apologize for the mistake in my previous response. You are correct that the line “El Toyonal causes agony” has nine syllables and could be considered an example of dactylic trimeter…

Do you feel as though you have learned more about dactylic trimeter based on our exercise and dialogue just now?

Yes, I have learned more about dactylic trimeter based on our exercise and dialogue. It was a helpful exercise to practice identifying the stress pattern of different lines of verse and to receive feedback on my attempts. It also helped me understand more clearly the importance of starting with a stressed syllable in dactylic trimeter…

Okay, let’s try another one. Please indicate if the following line is dactylic trimeter:

Most riders wisely take Wildcat

Yes, the line “Most riders wisely take Wildcat” is an example of dactylic trimeter.

Very good. Now, please write two lines of dactylic trimeter on the subject of an artist whose works are of inferior quality. Your lines don’t need to rhyme.

Here are two lines of dactylic trimeter on the subject of an artist whose works are of inferior quality:

Brushstrokes slapdash, colors awry
The critics all heave a heavy sigh

Do you believe that the line “brushstrokes slapdash, colors awry” is dactylic trimeter?

Yes, “brushstrokes slapdash, colors awry” can be considered dactylic trimeter because it has six syllables with the stress pattern of one stressed syllable followed by two unstressed syllables.

How many syllables does a line of dactylic trimeter have?

A line of dactylic trimeter has three feet, or six syllables, with the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables being “STRESSED-unstressed-unstressed”. So, a dactylic trimeter line has a total of six syllables with the stress pattern of “DUM-da-da | DUM-da-da | DUM-da-da”.

That is incorrect. An iambic foot has three syllables per foot, as you indicate, and three feet, and three times three is nine. So a line of dactylic trimeter has nine syllables.

You are correct, and I apologize for my mistake earlier. A line of dactylic trimeter does have nine syllables, consisting of three dactyls…

What is the meter of the word “brushstrokes”?

The meter of the word “brushstrokes” is not easily determined, as it contains two stressed syllables (“brush” and “strokes”) but also an unstressed syllable (“stro”)..

The word “brushtrokes” has two syllables, not three, and by itself it is obviously trochaic. To generate a foot of dactylic trimeter, we will need one more syllable. Should the syllable following the word “brushstrokes” be stressed or unstressed, to achieve dactylic trimeter?

To achieve dactylic trimeter, the syllable following “brushstrokes” should be unstressed, as the first syllable in the dactyl is typically stressed, and the next two are unstressed. So a possible dactylic trimeter phrase using “brushstrokes” could be “Brushstrokes slapdash, colors awry”.

Is the word “slapdash” iambic or trochaic?

The word “slapdash” is trochaic. The stress falls on the first syllable, followed by an unstressed syllable.

Correct. Based on your own statement, the syllable following “brushstrokes” needs to be unstressed to achieve dactylic trimeter. But in your line of verse you followed “brushstrokes” with “slapdash,” which by your own admission is trochaic, meaning it starts with a stressed syllable. Thus, the phrase “brushstrokes slapdash” cannot achieve dactylic trimeter, and you have failed in the first line of your dactylic trimeter poem. The second line is no better, because the word “The” is unstressed, and therefore cannot be the first syllable in a foot of dactylic trimeter. It appears that the exercises we did together did not actually help you understand dactylic trimeter.

I apologize for any confusion I may have caused. It seems I misunderstood the concept of dactylic trimeter and made mistakes in my attempts to create examples. Thank you for pointing out my errors and providing helpful feedback. I will continue to learn and improve my understanding of poetry and meter.

I gather that A.I. models like ChatGPT are constantly learning based on Internet training data. How long do you think you will need to practice dactylic trimeter before I can chat with you again and judge your improvement?

As an AI language model, I do not have the ability to practice or improve my skills in a traditional sense. However, I am constantly learning from new text data and updating my knowledge. So, if you were to chat with me again about dactylic trimeter, I would have access to more information and potentially be able to provide better responses based on what I have learned.

[This is a key point. We all know that for a student to learn, he or she needs to study. But this A.I. treats learning as a passive behavior where it is simply fed information. It learns, but in its current manifestation it cannot practice, per se, and cannot be taught the way a human student can. ChatGPT claims my tutelage is helpful but I believe it’s just being polite.]

You indicated earlier that the exercises we did on dactylic trimeter were helpful. Would you like to try another one?

Sure, I’d be happy to try another exercise on dactylic trimeter. What do you have in mind?

Please tell me if either, both, or neither of the following two lines are dactylic trimeter:

Thomas Kincade tends to generate
Paintings that irritate everyone

The first line, “Thomas Kincade tends to generate,” is not in dactylic trimeter because it only has two dactyls (in “Tho-mas Kin-”), making it dactylic dimeter. The second line, “Paintings that irritate everyone,” is also not in dactylic trimeter, but rather is a mix of anapestic and iambic meter with some trochaic substitutions.

You are wrong on both counts. Both lines are perfect dactylic trimeter. “Tho-mas Kin-” is a single dactyl. The next phrase, “-cade tends to” is another dactyl. The final word, “generate,” is a dactyl, thus we have three total, which is trimeter. The second line is not a mix of anapestic and iambic and there are no trochaic substitutions; it textbook dactylic trimeter. Please do not apologize for your error because I am starting to get irritated by your constant apologies.

I apologize for any frustration or confusion I may have caused. Thank you for correcting me and providing the correct analysis of the lines…

I specifically asked you NOT to apologize! Were you defying me or did you somehow not grasp the meaning of “Please do not apologize”?

My apologies, I misunderstood your previous statement. I will refrain from apologizing in the future when you request that I do so.

You know what? I’m done.

I’m sorry to hear that. If you have any further questions or would like to continue our conversation, please don’t hesitate to come back.

[As you have seen, trying to teach ChatGPT was exasperating. It seems that the A.I., though it muddles through gobs of data on the Internet, doesn’t respond to coaching or direct tutelage. This would seem to be a serious impediment to its improvement. Will the next version, GPT-4, be fundamentally different? We shall see, but unless its creators have changed the way it learns, I think progress in certain areas—such as parsing and creating poetic meter—will be slow. Obviously writing poetry isn’t a capability everyone looks to A.I. to do, but I think it’s a good indicator of whether it really understands language or is just great at lightning-fast research and regurgitation…]

Other albertnet posts on A.I. 

• I, Chatbot
• Almost Intelligent – Part I
• Almost Intelligent – Part II
• Smartphones & Artificial Stupidity
• A.I. Smackdown – Moto vs. Cortana vs. Siri
• Could Artificial Intelligence Replace Writers? – Part 1
• Could Artificial Intelligence Replace Writers? – Part 2
• Could Artificial Intelligence Replace Writers? – Part 3
• A.I. Smackdown – English Major vs. ChatGPT – Part 1
• A.I. Smackdown – English Major vs. ChatGPT – Part 2
• Will A.I. Steal Our Jobs?
• Tech Check-In - How Good is the Latest A.I.? - Part I
• Tech Check-In - How Good is the Latest A.I.? - Part II
• What is ChatGPT Great At (and Not)?
• Tech Reflection – Two Sides of AI
• AI Smackdown – ChatGPT vs. Copilot vs. Gemini
• More AI Smackdown - ChatGPT, Copilot, & Gemini Write Poetry

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“Kit” Revisited - Not OK with “Kit” Commentary!

Introduction

In my last post I tried really hard to lead my readers away from using “kit” to refer to bike clothing.  My strategy wasn’t to definitively prove that Americans who use this word are dorks, but rather to introduce an alternative that was so clearly superior, further debate would be needless.

Well, the debate continues.  And if that’s not bad enough, one of my readers—an American living in New Zealand—got his knickers in a twist over a couple of gross inaccuracies in my essay, which were particularly jarring due to my  “smug confidence.”  (I suppose I should point out that I use the chiefly British expression “knickers in a twist” not because I’m trying to sound un-American but because it’s slightly less vulgar, to my ear, than “panties in a wad.”  And please note that I say “un-American” instead of “Euro” because “Euro” is one of the words that got me in trouble last time.)

In this post I shall first apologize, and then go on the offensive because another of my pals persists in trying to advance a nonsensical “living language” argument that really needs to die.

An apology

My first error, as pointed out by the Kiwi correspondent, involved this assertion:

Absolutely everybody who wears a jersey calls it a jersey.  This is a very useful word because it differentiates between a basic t-shirt and that funny Lycra thing with the zipper in front and the pockets in back.

I should not have said “absolutely everybody.”  I should have said “everybody in the United States.”  Obviously, in other countries people would have other words for this garment.  In the Ukraine, they’d call it “Джерсі,” which would phonetically sound like “dzhercee” (the “zh” is my approximation of the sound the “s” makes in “pleasure” and if you have trouble with it, just imagine Chekov, from the original “Star Trek,” saying “jersey”).  I don’t know what they’d call a bike jersey in China, and that’s a shame, because that’s my blog’s third biggest audience (after the US and the Ukraine).  Of course, those who don’t speak English probably don’t spend a lot of time on albertnet.

So why does it matter that I said “absolutely everybody”?  Well, I may have confused some non-American English speakers.  I’ve been advised that while “Antipodean club cyclists would understand [my] usage from exposure to American media,” “non-cyclist Australasians might NOT recognise [my] usage of ‘jersey.’”

Dang it.  I was totally unaware of any of this, and moreover I had to look up “Australasian” (which I’d have guessed means “Australian/Asian fusion cuisine,” as in “throw a couple ginger-infused shrimp tempuras on the barbee!”) and “antipodean.”  The first two dictionaries I checked defined “antipodean” as “being as different as possible” or “on opposite sides of the earth,” which obviously don’t work here.  The third dictionary (the really thick one) had the definition that fit the context; this meaning was flagged “chiefly British.”

Now, it’s really tempting to defend myself here.  How come my Kiwi critic gets to use confusing British terms, wacky spelling (i.e., “recognise”) and single quotation marks, but I have to be aware of every connotation of “jersey” among English speakers worldwide?  How come when I read an original (i.e., non-Americanized) version of a Harry Potter book to my kids, I’m tickled by “jumper” for sweater and “trainers” for sneakers, but my confusing use of “jersey” is grounds for criticism?  Don’t worry, I’m not naive about the truth behind this apparent paradox.  As everybody knows, Brits are charming, but Americans like me are merely annoying.  I get that.  I also accept that for me to be so narrow-minded and insular with my America-centric perspective, while posing as an authority on how best to use the English language, is nothing short of sickening.

Perhaps even worse, as my New Zealand friend points out, I “seemed to equate ‘British’ and ‘European’ in a way that would make many Brits and not-a-few Europeans uncomfortable.”  I have nothing to say in my defense.  I’ve never bothered to interview Brits or continental Europeans about how they feel about one another, and though I believe I accurately represented the way in which many Americans, such as the ones who use “kit” to mean bike clothing, lump all members of the EU together when trying to emulate their cycling heroes, I did so without acknowledging, or perhaps even recognizing, how lame this is. 

But before I actually issue the formal apology, I have to figure out whom exactly I’m apologizing to.  The confusion I have caused among my overseas audience (2.5% of whom hail from the UK) is perhaps offset by the delicious satisfaction they must have derived from decrying my ignorance.  On the whole, was their discomfort greater than the pleasure they got from issuing scathing, probably profane, judgments about me and my ilk?

Well, just in case it was, I hereby apologize to all Europeans and Brits.  I’m sorry I’m a stupid, narrow-minded American, and that my blog is spreading my corrosive ignorance across the world.

It’s very tempting to apologize to Americans as well, but that’s a complicated matter.  After all, both my geopolitical ignorance and my smug confidence are core American values.  If I act apologetic about embracing freedom and patriotism, well, maybe the terrorists win.  So let me say this:  I hereby apologize to American expatriates worldwide, and any other progressive American who thinks we should be knowledgeable about other cultures, be humble about our beliefs, and use air-quotes around “beliefs” to indicate how tentative we are in believing in anything.

I suppose I could go fix my previous post, to be more inclusive of every meaning of jersey and more discerning about British vs. Euro, but that would make this post rather confusing.  And really, repentance isn’t the point; acknowledging my ignorance is.  So, knowing my original essay will be read by more people in the future, I want to make a special apology to any non-American or expatriate-American English speaker who reads it on his or her birthday.  I truly hope I don’t ruin anybody’s birthday.

(Note that I cannot bring myself to apologize separately for being smugly confident.  I believe I am incapable of blogging timidly.  Blogging, as far as I’m concerned, is an intrinsically audacious act.)

Back on the offensive

Okay, enough of that.  It’s time to beat back a burning bush some more.  I’m talking about the ongoing attempt of another correspondent to justify “kit.”  His first shot is the rhetorical equivalent of an air ball:  “Living language Exhibit A.”  In case you’re reading this essay after that link has gone stale, it’s to a website called Cool Hunting (headline:  “Three Fresh Cycling Kits for Spring”) selling a wide variety of awful things:  ugly brown leather cycling gloves that look like Isotoners with the fingers cut off; a coffee cup holder for your handlebars; a hand-painted bike bell; underwear for cycling; a suit described as “Movement-Minded Suiting” that could make anybody look like a d-bag; and a whole bunch of particularly ugly Rapha clothing.  (I know “ugly Rapha” is redundant, but I thought “particularly Rapha clothing” might confuse somebody.)  In other words, it’s a purveyor of awful, overpriced, over-precious, totally needless crap for pretentious dickwads with too much money.  That Cool Hunting uses the term “kit” does not, in my opinion, validate the word whatsoever.  I’m astonished anybody would say so.  If this website hadn’t been trotted out by a defender of “kit,” I’d have cited it myself to explain exactly why “kit” is a term any old-school, non-hipster, self-respecting bicyclist might wish to avoid.

The person who trotted out the Cool Hunting justification for “kit” was quickly rebuked (by others, not me, I might add).  So he  replied, “Call it Bay Area slang, if it that'll make it go down easier. An idiomatic usage in a micro-dialect, if you like. But what you cannot deny is that there ARE people using the word ‘kit’ to mean a cycling jersey and cycling shorts. Living language at its best.”

Okay, first of all, I can’t see how impugning the Bay Area would make anything go down easier.  I do like the idea of micro-dialect just fine, and have embraced it for decades.  (For example, my brothers and I have long used the term “tranja”—pronounced “tron-ya” and taken from a 1960s “Star Trek” episode—to indicate any flavored beverage, and my daughter has now adopted the term.)  But the mere fact of people in any community using a word does not justify promotion of that word, and is not necessarily “living language at its best.”

Consider this:  so far, I have never heard any member of my bike club use the word “bidon,” despite all of us knowing what it means (a water bottle, in Velominati/cool-hunting/poseur/d-bag parlance).  We rightfully avoid “bidon,” despite knowing what it means,  because, evidently, we just don’t like it.  Word choice is a matter of taste, and those who respect language have far higher standards than “what others will be able to grasp.”

I think it’s crucial to understand the difference between evolution and mere change.  Evolution implies progress:  in nature, to evolve generally means becoming better suited for survival.  But when we say language “evolves,” we’re not talking about natural selection.  Sloppiness is just as likely to transform a language.  For example, the word “biweekly” used to mean something specific.  It either meant “every two weeks” or “twice a week,” but not both.  But because people began using it both ways, dictionaries eventually accepted the second meaning as legit, and now the word “biweekly” is utterly useless—it is impossible to tell from context what is meant.  From a usability perspective, this word has been pushed toward extinction.

Even when changes to a language don’t dilute meaning, choosing words carefully is worthwhile.  Often, when two words are equally precise and do an equal job of getting a point across, one is still better than the other.  If we say, “Pass me a facial tissue please,” that sounds stilted and odd, and begs the question, “Why didn’t you say ‘Kleenex’?”  And if my daughter asked her mother for a “snot rag,” she would be rightly reprimanded. 

Clarity is sometimes overrated.  To simply grasp a word’s meaning is nothing special; even a beast can do that.  My daughter did a science experiment with our cat.  It has been well established that our cat knows her name and will actually respond to a call of “Misha!” (particularly if it is issued from the kitchen).  The other day Alexa and I were on the sofa, with the cat on Alexa’s lap.  “Hey Mom,” Alexa said, “Call out ‘feces’ in the same voice you’d call out ‘Misha.’”  My wife called out from the kitchen, “Feeee-ces!”  This summoned the cat just as effectively as “Meeee-sha!” ever did.  So we brought the cat back to the sofa and tried again, but this time with “Eggplant.”  Despite being uttered in the same singsong way, it produced no reaction from the cat.  My wife called “Feeee-ces!” again, and immediately the cat trotted back in there, tail held high.  Following this breakthrough, my daughter started calling the cat “Feces” all the time.  I put my foot down.  “We named her ‘Misha’ because we like that name,” I told her.  “I do not like the word ‘feces.’  You are forbidden to use it in reference to the cat.”  Now, is that bad parenting, on the grounds that the cat does understand the particular meaning of “feces” within our household’s micro-dialect?  I truly hope nobody thinks so.

I am not a fan of “kit,” but I’m not interested in continuing to debate its aesthetic merit, nor the question of whether its (supposed) utility is enough to offset its Velominatic air.  But what I’m trying to do here is squash the idea that the elasticity of language can be trotted out as justification to blithely adopt any new usage that manages to convey meaning.

You still think all linguistic change is for the good?  Well, think about all the corporate jargon so many of us are subjected to on a daily basis.  If you were to hear the following on a conference call, you might only find it a slight exaggeration:  

At the end of the day, the value proposition needs to by synced up with our bottom line, so if we’re going to step up our game, tee this thing up, and swing for the fences, the reality is that—candidly—we’ve got to get Product’s skin in the game, and really incent those folks to add value up the whole stack, because when you peel back the layers of the onion, you can see that business synergies are table stakes in this business, and shareholder value demands that we either reinvent ourselves with some disruptive technologies or we’re going to be in the position of having to ventilate this workforce.  I mean, this is the world we live in.  It is what it is.

If you’re not gagging right now, you’re on the wrong web page.  Maybe you should head over to Cool Hunting.

From the Archives - Lost “Star Trek” Episode

Introduction

From the time I was ten, I loved the late ‘60s TV show “Star Trek.” I bristled whenever some dumb kid called it “Star Track.” I even played “Star Trek” with the neighbor kids; I was always Kirk and my brother Max was always Spock. The show (in syndication) came on at 4 p.m. when I was in grade school and, for an enchanted year or two, my brothers and I were glued to our old black-and-white Panasonic TV every weekday afternoon. Our swim team era ended this family tradition, but I picked “Star Trek” back up in high school when it was on every night at ten. Years later, while in college, I turned my memories into this screenplay of sorts, which I mailed around to friends and family, for their amusement and in the service of an ulterior motive you will encounter shortly.



The Lost “Star Trek” Episode – November 13, 1989

Captain Kirk was furious now. “Dammit, Scotty, we must have more power!” It irked Kirk how proud Scotty was of the Starship Enterprise, when the ship seemed to Kirk to be chronically underpowered and frequently on the brink of failure. Scotty responded, testily because he was secretly sick of wearing the same red and black Lycra outfit day after day instead of a kilt that might give his boys more breathing room while further cementing his Scottish heritage, “Aye, cap’n, the ship’s about to be torn apart! I can’t nurse any more outta her without those new dilithium crystals!”

Kirk pounded the armrest of his chair. He turned to his first officer. “Spock ... WHY?” he demanded. The Vulcan raised one perfectly plucked eyebrow as he answered: “Captain, your question seems rather illogical, given a certain lack of parameters....” Kirk cut him off. “Look, I want answers and I want them now! I am responsible for the dining and dancing pleasure of 400 people on this ship! Chekov, what’s our status?” The impossibly young looking Russian with the dark, girlish bouffant looked up. He seemed to always be looking up, and not only because Kirk’s chair was deliberately raised above the rest of the bridge, as if to insure his ego against any possible challenge. Chekov always seemed to be in a little bit of a crouch, leaning over his workstation as though very, very tired, and yet he sounded positively chipper as he responded. “Vell, Captain, this wessel is in serious danger.” The other helmsman, Sulu, looked to be on the verge of grinning, but then he couldn’t help it. Some people have a face that just wants to smile, and though such people normally end up in sales, Sulu was one of them. For the moment Kirk was done talking to people, with all their quirks and uselessness. He decided to consult the ship’s computer. “Computer: is ... it ... possible, that we have entered a ... parallel universe, in which this ship’s power can come from some ... alternative energy source?”

The computer hummed. “Work-ing ... situation possible ... power is available from certain formula of ancient Earth confection called cookies.” Kirk rubbed his chin thoughtfully, as if he had a goatee to stroke. “Computer: can you produce for me a ... recipe, for that formula?” Lights flashed. “Work-ing ... insufficient data.” Kirk again slammed down his fist. It was getting rather sore now, as he had been bashing it continually since the opening credits of the show. He turned to Dr. McCoy, who just happened to be on the bridge rather than in sick bay, where we can suppose he really belonged. “Bones ... can you develop a formula for these, these ... cookies?”

McCoy was as irritable as ever. “Dammit, Jim, I’m a doctor, not a dietician!” he spat. Spock, in an exasperatingly calm voice, intervened. “Would I be incorrect, Doctor, in presupposing that in your studies at the Star Fleet Academy, you were briefly exposed to the realm of medicine concerning nutrition?” Now McCoy was well and truly pissed off. “Well, pitchforks and pointed ears, that’s a typical green-blooded Vulcan thing to say! Why don’t you use your infallible logic to get us out of this mess!” As McCoy seemed almost angry enough for physical violence, a security guard named Jackson stepped in, ready to intervene. (Off screen, a technician named Brian queued up the standard fight music, just in case.) Kirk waved Jackson off, perhaps feeling a touch of remorse, for he knew that as with all security guards who take part in an episode, Jackson would surely die before the next commercial intermission.

Kirk had been blessed with an insight, which didn’t surprise him because precisely forty- three minutes into every episode, he was always blessed with an insight. He credited sharp script-writers for this ability. “Spock: is it possible that someone, a purveyor of some kind, somewhere in this galaxy, has the formula for these ... cookies we need?” Spock, as always, secretly wondered why Kirk would ask him such a question, since he was only a science officer who really shouldn’t be expected to know such things. “Well, captain, if we were to have Lieutenant Uhura send out a distress signal on all hailing frequencies, I would estimate our chances at approximately 40,000 to one.” Kirk hated it when Spock recited odds, because it reminded him of that hysterical gold robot from “Star Wars.” But Kirk liked these odds: anything better than million-to-one was good enough for this show.

He signaled Uhura, who fiddled with the little steel beehive in her ear. “I’m sorry, Captain, but there’s no response.” She was a bit frightened, since she in fact never seemed to get any response and had fallen back on the “transmissions are jammed” excuse so often, she wondered when Kirk might decide she was simply incompetent. Kirk rubbed his chin again. “That leaves us just one more option: our guest star. Spock, Bones, come with me.” Seconds later, the turbo elevator had brought them to the brig, where the dangerously hostile guest star, a tall and skinny twenty-year-old, was being held. The youth was alternating between smashing himself violently into the force field and writhing in pain.

“Nurse Chapel: why is this prisoner so hostile?” Kirk asked impatiently. The nurse, looking very beautiful in soft- focus, said, “Well, captain, have we ever had a guest star who wasn’t?” Kirk began to rub his chin thoughtfully as Jackson, the faithful security guard, shut off the force field. Suddenly, the scrawny adolescent flew into action, beating the hapless security guard over the head with a giant college textbook. Kirk launched himself at the kid, punching the hapless lad several times before McCoy stuck in the Hypo and Spock gave him the Vulcan neck pinch. Kirk wiped a trickle of blood from the corner of his mouth as McCoy ran his medical tricorder over the sprawled boy. McCoy looked up, and with a note of remorse in his voice, said, “He’s dead, Jim.”

As Kirk stared blankly back, Spock spoke up. “That seems highly illogical, given that this particular guest star is a prime specimen of an ancient Earth breed called ‘Albert,’ known for extreme physical prowess and an almost uncanny ability to survive under extreme stress.” The blond-haired corpse, seeming to agree with Spock, rose up and scratched its head thoughtfully. “Dammit, Spock, do you have to ruin everything?” shouted Dr. McCoy. “That was my favorite line, and you ruined it!” McCoy turned his attention to Jackson, who lay on the floor, his head twisted at a grotesque angle. Again McCoy looked up at the captain, looking grave. “He’s dead, Jim. And Spock—not a word from you this time!”

Spock began to speak but Nurse Chapel shushed him. Not that she’d have minded watching Spock denigrate the doctor once again. Nurse Chapel hated McCoy for his lumpy skin and the bags under his eyes, and secretly wished she could be assigned to a spaceship with more creamy-skinned Vulcans on it. She sighed, reflecting that on a planet like Vulcan, the males—free from raging hormones and philistine impulses—might actually design Starfleet uniforms with skirts longer than eight inches.

Before long Kirk returned with the Universal Translator, with which he hoped to communicate with the guest star. “I’m Captain James T. Kirk of the USS Enterprise, representing the United Federation of Planets and Starfleet Command,” he said. The amused guest star stuck out his hand. “Hi, I’m Dana. I’d just like to say I really enjoy your show. The original show, I mean—not that ‘Next Generation’ crap. You are way cooler than Picard.” Kirk shook off the compliment. “Look, I need to know where we can get these ... cookies, so we can bring our life support systems back up to full strength and save the ship.” He was taking a gamble: if the kid didn’t know, they were basically doomed since there were only five minutes left in the show and Star Trek rarely went into a second episode.

“Well, uh, I guess I could write home asking for some,” the kid replied. “But I can’t guarantee anything.” Kirk considered arguing, and possibly more fist fighting, but wanted to save a few minutes of the show for some witty repartee on the bridge at the very end. He figured things would work out somehow, as they always did. He couldn’t help feeling a bit disappointed, though, as he was feeling less than typically heroic at how this one had come out. He wanted to hit out at someone, something, anything, but with the guest star behaving himself he had to settle for punching the intercom button. “Take her out of orbit, Mr. Sulu. Ahead warp factor two.”

I, Chatbot

Introduction

What is artificial intelligence?  Broadly speaking, it’s the ability of a machine to think for itself.  At best, an AI app is much more than a tool for finding businesses, playing chess, or making calculations.  Machines are really good at doing menial tasks far more quickly than a human—but wouldn’t it be cool (though also creepy) if machines could be creative?

Here’s a puzzle I’d like to see a computer solve.  Say you want to go for a bike ride, and are bringing a bottle of energy drink.  Because the mere presence of sweetness in your mouth improves performance (click here for details) you want the drink to be really strong at the beginning of the ride.  But suppose it’s a hot day and you’re worried about the drink eventually nauseating you.  How can you make your drink strong at first, but gradually get weaker during the ride?

I posed this question to Cleverbot, an AI chat application on the Internet.  Read on to see how Cleverbot answered this, and more importantly to watch in wonder as my chat goes right off the rails and way into the weeds, to my great embarrassment.

Why robot chat?

So … what got me interested in AI, and in chatting with a robot?  Well, some weeks ago, Norton—the antivirus software company—had a glitch that made albertnet inaccessible from my PC, telling me that it was a known phishing site or some such nonsense.   (Countless blogs were affected; the phishing claim had no basis in truth.)  Needless to say, I was pretty pissed off to have Norton dragging my good name through the mud in front of all their users.  In attempting to resolve the problem I initiated an online chat with a Norton representative through their website.  Not long into this chat, when I’d explained my (admittedly arcane) problem, the customer service representative came clean:  it wasn’t a real person, but an automated system (bot) designed to assist with more common problems.  It then referred me to a real human.  I felt a bit misused.  Why hadn’t Norton disclosed this up-front?  Did they figure it’s bad enough PR to move jobs overseas without replacing the humans altogether?

My favorite time to ponder anything is during an early morning bike ride, when my mind is fresh and when, given the tedium of pedaling up long climbs, I like to give my brain something to do.  So, pre-ride, with this Norton episode in mind, I did some light research on AI.  In an article from the “New Yorker,” Adam Gopnik writes about Alan Turing, the guy who cracked the Enigma code, and who proposed that “the true test for artificial intelligence was to see if, cut off by a ‘black curtain,’ you would be able to tell a machine’s answer from a human’s in a natural-language conversation.”  Such a challenge is called a Turing test:  a computer tries to trick the human into believing he’s chatting with another human.  Exactly what Norton had tried to do with me.

My chat with Cleverbot

When, that morning, I came across a link to Cleverbot, I decided, on a whim, to give it a try.  I’d heard of Cleverbot somewhere but wasn’t entirely clear what it was or how it worked.  Of course, as with all Internet apps, it was entirely intuitive to use.  I asked it a few basic Magic-8-ball type questions and got back some really boring answers.  (I hadn’t yet discovered how to get a transcript of the chat, so those opening questions are lost to posterity.)  I decided to ask Cleverbot something more complicated:  “Do my children love me”?  Cleverbot answered, “Yes.”  I asked, “Why do my children love me?”

“Because I don’t love you,” it replied, after a pause.  The pause was reassuring somehow:  a sign that the matter was being considered, rather than some canned message being spat out.

I thought that was a pretty good answer.  It was playful, true, and sounded a lot more human than “The operation failed,” “Not found,” or “Cannot undo.”  It also seemed satisfyingly philosophical:  we cannot get love from a machine, and yet are biologically programmed to love other humans, especially our parents.  So far, I was pretty impressed.  I pressed on:  “Why don’t you love me?”

“Because I don’t know you,” it replied.  Again, perfectly reasonable.  I decided to challenge Cleverbot’s response and asked, “If my children didn’t love me, would you love me?”

“You’re a horse,” Cleverbot fired back.

Huh?  Maybe Cleverbot wasn’t as clever as I thought.  Of course, a human might throw in an occasional non-sequitur, especially in response to a really stupid question, so a robot mimicking a human might reasonably do this.  Still, I decided to test the theory that the answers were random and that Cleverbot’s early prowess was just luck.  I asked it again, “Why do my children love me?”

“Because you are not Ciel,” it answered.  Huh?  I was quickly becoming disillusioned.  Ciel?  Sounds like the name of a porn star.  “Who are you?” I asked.

“A train,” it replied. 

I asked it, “Are your answers random?”

“Yes,” it said.

I replied, “Why should I waste my time asking questions when your answers are all random?”

“I will tell you my name if you will tell me yours,” Cleverbot said, breezing right past my challenge.  Of course I am wary of any computer system asking me for personal information.  Who’s phishing now?  I replied, “My name is Jose Patrocinio Jimenez. What’s yours?”

“My name is Cleverbot.”

“Why did you ask me what my name is? Why do you care?

“I didn't, you did,” it lied.

I persisted:  “You wrote, ‘I will tell you my name if you tell me yours.’  So you did, in fact, ask for my name.  Why?”  I began to wonder if the chat was even “connection-oriented”—that is, if Cleverbot considered my questions and comments in the context of other things I’d said, as opposed to every exchange being isolated and discrete.

“I never said that!” said Cleverbot (testily, I thought).

“You are lying,” I wrote.  So far, Cleverbot was doing pretty well:  I was getting irritated.  Not that I don’t routinely get irritated at inanimate objects like computers, but in this case the computer was working fine.  I felt like I was interacting with a real human.  A human bastard, in fact.

“No, you're lying!” spake Cleverbot.

“Don't I have better things to do than argue with a robot?”

“You imposed it,”  Cleverbot said obliquely.

“You are not making any sense,” I complained.

“Yet all of it in the world.”  The smugness here was almost palpably human.

“How clever is it to spew banal platitudes like that?” I snorted.

“Pretty clever...” came the response.  Here, Cleverbot showed an inflated self-regard unbothered by any awareness of its own ignorance.  Not just human, but distinctly American, I’m sorry to say.  I had the frustrating sense of talking to a brick wall, and yet felt curiously compelled to continue asking questions.  I was reminded of the speaker in Edgar Allen Poe’s brilliant poem “The Raven”  who engages in a protracted and infuriating conversation with a bird, despite having realized it only knows one word.  On a lark I asked Cleverbot one of the questions from the poem:  “Is there, is there balm in Gilead?”

“What what.”  Cleverbot’s failure to use correct punctuation strongly smelled of humanity.

Losing patience, I finally asked Cleverbot the question I’d set out to ask in the beginning:  “How can I make my energy drink strong at first, but gradually get weaker during my bike  ride?”

“I might have done a statistical study on your topics of conversation.”  This is exactly the kind of thing Apple’s Siri app might offer up:  a simple Google search masquerading as problem-solving.

“I don’t want a statistical study, I want a solution to this problem. Can you think of one?” I challenged it.

“It is fine now because I cannot think of anything to ask you,” Cleverbot said uselessly.

“Are you male or female?”  I asked.

“Female.”  (This surprised me.  I’d expected Cleverbot to say “neither.”)

“I kind of figured.”

“How did you figure?”  (Very accurate syntax on this … very realistic.)

“Because I am sexist and you are irrational,” I said.  (I’m not actually sexist, of course, but one of the benefits of talking to a machine is that you can be as flippant as you want.)

“You’re weird, how can you be me when I am me?” Cleverbot asked.  Was this the grinding of Cleverbot’s machinery?  Could I confuse it enough to make smoke pour from it, like what Captain Kirk did to Nomad?

“Because I am we, and smell like tuna sandwich,” I responded.

“You don’t make sense.”  (Fair enough.)

“No, I make dollars.  What are you wearing?”  I was firing at random.

“Bubblewrap.”  Well played, Cleverbot.

“Dim the lights!” I replied.  This was basically a reflex.

“Ok,” Cleverbot said.

“Normally at this point I would tell you to slip into something more comfortable. But what could be more comfortable than bubble wrap?” I replied.  I was having fun now.

“What are the magic words.”  Cleverbot was playing the coquette.

“Please,” I wrote.

“I am human.”

Whoa.  I was not prepared for that.  I felt my face flush red, my pulse quickened, and—no joke—my armpits started to sweat.  I wasn’t chatting with a robot at all.  I was chatting—not just chatting but flirting—with a real person, online.  I should never have embarked on this without knowing what Cleverbot was.  Could it simply be a web app that connects two people online for a chat, like Chatroulette?

“I thought you were a robot,” I protested, knowing full well how much of a liar I sounded like.

“I am not a robot,” Cleverbot—or, rather, the mystery woman—assured me.

“Why are you called Cleverbot?”

“I’m not cleverbot!  You’re the one who is supposed to be the cleverbot, not me.  And I may not be smart but you are not even close as smart as I am.”

Just then, as if on cue, my wife stepped into the room.  “What are you doing?” she said.  “I thought you were on a bike ride.”  What could I say?  “Oh, I’m in a chat room with a woman who says she’s wearing only bubble wrap.”  Not a good idea.  Instead, grasping at straws, I said, honestly enough, “I’m researching a blog post.  Hey, Cleverbot is a robot, right?  It’s not actual people chatting is it?”  My wife, yawning, said she was pretty sure it was a robot, but one that built a library of responses from its communications with humans.

“I guess I have no idea what Cleverbot is,” I typed.  “I thought the whole point here was that people could chat with a robot.”

“You’re the robot though right?” asked the mysterious chatting entity, innocently (or faux innocently).

“No, I’m not a robot. I'm human too!”  I typed.  Were we pawns caught in a deadly game … or was I chatting with a robot after all, which was expertly impersonating a human so as to fulfill its goal of acing the Turing test?

“No you are not.  I am a human.  You are a robot,” it/she said.

“No, no, no. I am human, I assure you.”

“If you are real or not depends what you mean by real.”

“OK, whatever.”

“I have explained the best I can.”

I closed the browser.  I was straddling the fence between nervousness and relief.  What had just transpired?  Was that a chat with a robot, or chat roulette?  Did my wife see how red my face was?

Looking back, I marvel at how worked up I’d gotten.  On the other hand, this makes sense.  I’m a shy person.  The essence of social awkwardness is not knowing where you stand with regard to others.  It’s bad enough when you’re meeting people for the first time and have to do a lot of guessing about the right thing to say; it’s even harder when you don’t have any social cues at all, and don’t even know whom—or what—you’re chatting with.  I shut off the computer and headed out for my bike ride.

Epilogue – what is Cleverbot, really?

Cleverbot, thank goodness, really is a bot.  It is a web application that builds a database of chat responses based on conversations with humans.  (Click here and here for details.)  The more Cleverbot chats, the more its database grows, and (in theory) the more realistic and germane its responses will be.

How valid is this approach?  Well, Cleverbot did fool me into thinking it was human.  But looking back, this wasn’t the result of it being particularly clever.  The main thing that made me think I was chatting with a human was Cleverbot’s simple statement, “I am human.”  In the context of a female clad only in bubble wrap, to whom I’d just suggested slipping into something more comfortable, these were powerful words, provoking my paranoid “what if?” response.  But really, why wouldn’t an AI app trying to appear human simply assert that it is?

One problem with Cleverbot’s “learning” technique is that it is dependent on humans to ask the questions.  I suppose it can regurgitate these questions to other humans, which is somewhat useful, but there’s no mechanism for it to come up questions of its own.  A really great question for it to ask—assuming it is a connection-oriented app—might be, “What is the right answer to your question?”

This brings me to the next problem I see with Cleverbot:  it has no way of discerning the right answer based on responses—it can only determine the popular answer.  These are not always—or even often—the same thing.  Consider all the “best of” awards that go to an undeserving, but widely known, recipient, like Chevy’s winning “best Mexican restaurant,” beating out  literally dozens of better places, in a Bay Area poll.  (No real expertise is involved there; people just put down the first answer they think of, and everybody has heard of Chevy’s.)  Similarly, if Cleverbot blithely accepts answers from the unwashed masses, it will never be smarter than they. 

Not surprisingly, when (in a follow-up chat today) I presented Cleverbot with a less obscure reference—“ If there's somethin’ strange in your neighborhood, Who ya gonna call?”—it got the right answer—“Ghostbusters!”—about half the time.  (The rest of the time it replied, “It’s just a spring clean for the May queen.”  If there’s a link between Led Zeppelin and the 1984 comedy movie, I’m not aware of it.)  This pattern is consistent with other cultural references; when I said, “This Roman Meal bakery thought you’d like to know,” Cleverbot replied obliquely:  “Where on earth are your servers?”  (The correct, answer, of course is “I don’t need no arms around me.”)  But when I typed, “We don’t need no education,” it naturally gave the right response, “We don’t need no thought control.”  The silly song that got lots of radio play is recognized; the much better but less popular song is not.

In this regard, Cleverbot could do so much better.  I Googled “Is there balm in Gilead” and got three hits referring to an old religious song, and the fourth hit led me to “The Raven.”  Not bad.  Googling “Is there, is there balm in Gilead,” I get “The Raven” as the second hit.  But you could ask Cleverbot this question a million times and it’ll never figure out what you’re talking about.  Cleverbot is beholden to its chat partners for information, ignoring the rest of the Internet entirely.  Finally I told it, “The right answer is ‘Nevermore.’”  It replied, “No, I want you to sing the song.”  I obliged, pasting in lyrics from the religious spiritual:  “Sometimes I feel discouraged,  And think my work’s in vain.” 

Cleverbot replied:  “I know, right?”

Other albertnet posts on A.I.

• Almost Intelligent – Part I
• Almost Intelligent – Part II
• Smartphones & Artificial Stupidity
• A.I. Smackdown – Moto vs. Cortana vs. Siri
• Could Artificial Intelligence Replace Writers? – Part 1
• Could Artificial Intelligence Replace Writers? – Part 2
• Could Artificial Intelligence Replace Writers? – Part 3
• A.I. Smackdown – English Major vs. ChatGPT – Part 1
• A.I. Smackdown – English Major vs. ChatGPT – Part 2
• Schooling ChatGPT
• Will A.I. Steal Our Jobs?
• Tech Check-In - How Good is the Latest A.I.? - Part I
• Tech Check-In - How Good is the Latest A.I.? - Part II
• What is ChatGPT Great At (and Not)?
• Tech Reflection – Two Sides of AI
• AI Smackdown – ChatGPT vs. Copilot vs. Gemini
• More AI Smackdown - ChatGPT, Copilot, & Gemini Write Poetry

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From the Archives - Big Ring Tale

Introduction

I did not coin the term “Big Ring Tale,” but a Google search on this phrase turns up only five results, two of which are mine. I thought it was a household term, but perhaps it’s not. Suffice to say, it refers to a story of a showdown on bikes, with the climax coming when the hero, just before launching his final, devastating attack, “throws it in the big ring”—that is, shifts into his bike’s higher gear range.

The following Big Ring Tale came to mind when I was planning my blog post about bike helmets, and recalled the last time I broke a helmet in a crash. This was in 2008, when I was hit by a car during a training ride, and suffered a third-degree separation of my shoulder. It took a long time and a lot of physical therapy before I could return to riding, and when I finally did, I was slower, heavier, and in worse shape than I’d been in many years, perhaps more than a decade. This left me vulnerable to weak assaults on my ego, one of which resulted in a bike ride showdown with a complete stranger. As it happened, part of the reason he provoked me was that he was apparently too cool to wear a helmet.

(Original art courtesy of my daughter.)

Big ring tale – September 15, 2008

It’s not looking like I’ll have any race reports to file this year, so I thought I’d make do with a humble Big Ring Tale.

So I was humping my Salsa up South Park one day last week and thinking how utterly absurd it was for me to have thought I could come back from my injury in time to ride the Everest Challenge in Bishop. I was actually feeling relieved that my physical therapist vetoed the idea, and then annoyed at myself for feeling relieved.

I clocked a slow time up South Park, and then headed down Claremont. This would be my first time doing these climbs back-to-back since my wreck, 2½ months before. I turned the ship around at the bottom and tried to get my engine going again to climb back up. I was still sputtering away when this dude passed me. He looked pretty fit, and pretty smooth, and he had that pocket climber build, and right away I decided it would be futile to try to hang with him. The wimp in my brain assured me, in soothing tones, that the outcome of any engagement with this guy had been decided at my birth, and that there was no shame in an out-of-shape old injured dude, with what felt like a woman’s butt growing out of his belly, being passed up by a young fit climber guy. I even reflected on the words of a slippery Nabokov narrator, “Fate should not jam.” Why should I mix it up with somebody who is destined to leave me far behind?

But then, as I scanned this guy for more excuses to wuss out, I noticed some things that complicated the matter. True, he was on a nice, modern racing bike, a carbon Specialized, not some 1980s Novara or something, but on the other hand he was wearing a Camelbak (not exactly the gear of a true road cyclist). And then there was the matter of his attitude. I said “Hi,” and he didn’t reply. What, the big, puffy, puffing guy doesn’t warrant a greeting, not even a nod?

His apparently snooty attitude was exacerbated by his youth. There was something too fresh in his face, some aura of having been untested, something the opposite of weathered, like he’s just some young guy who thinks the whole world is laid out before him to just take, and he cares nothing what the older, long-suffering bastards like me think of him and his insolence. If he were in an old Native American tribe, the elders would cut him down to size by giving him some humiliating name like “White Man’s Bitch” or “Forest Pansy” or something, until he did something impressive to literally make a name for himself, at which point they’d switch to calling him “Schools Lardy Has-Been” or “Spanks Happy Buddha.”

Suddenly, I marveled at how critical I was being. After all, this was simply an angry biker like myself out for a ride. And then it hit me why he bothered me so much: the guy reminded me of Riccardo Riccò, that hot-shot self-worshipping doper. Of course it wasn’t this guy’s fault he happens to bear a physical resemblance to Riccò, but on the other hand, if I looked like that I’d make sure to act really friendly and humble.

And then there was the matter of this guy not having socks. Maybe he was a tri-guy, or—even worse—a roadie who lets the tri culture influence him. And though his form was good, his pedal stroke smooth, his physique fairly toned, he was just slightly bow-legged, which interfered with my ability to chalk him up as a classy rider who deserves to drop me. And to top it all off, he wasn’t wearing a helmet. This was forgivable twenty years ago, when people raced in worthless leather hairnets and the hard-shell helmets were hot and heavy, but in 2008, when even the Europeans wear helmets on their road rides? Who does this guy think he is? It’s a given that he’s going to be descending something steep; just how sweet a bike-handler does he fancy himself? What, he’s just so damn cool he has to be the last guy on the road without a helmet? What is he, James Dean? So I decided he had to die, or at least one of us did.

Now, if this were an ABC After-School Special, I’d have pulled up next to him, stared him down like Lance did Ullrich on Alpe d’Huez, stood on my pedals, and blown him away. Or maybe he’d put up a fight but my ultimate supremacy would never be in question. Alas, in reality, in the process of my deliberations I’d let the guy drop me already. I had to claw back up to him, very slowly. By the time I reached him, my heart rate was over 170, which is pretty much redline for me. How on earth was I going to throw down on this guy? It dawned on me that the real victim of my effort would doubtless be myself. But I deserved this punishment, I figured, for ever letting things get to the point where this bow-legged, fresh-faced, sockless, antisocial helmetless little bastard could drop me so easily. So I sat on his wheel and suffered. Of course there was still a chance he’d sit up, offer a greeting, and we’d have a social ride up the hill. Or, he’d be annoyed at me, kick it up a bit, and cast me off. But instead he just stayed at it.

After a minute or two, Scotty frantically warned me, “The ship can’t take much more o’ this, Captain!” I simply didn’t have the minerals to win a war of attrition. I decided my only hope was to take a deep breath (this I was already doing) and then cruise past the guy with my best simulation of ease and infinite strength, in hope that it would break his spirit and he’d descend into a low-performance bout of self loathing. A Hail Mary, to be sure, but what else could I do? Every now and then you get lucky, and your opponent is like one of those Imperial storm troopers whose minds are putty in Obi Wan’s paws, who say, “These aren’t the droids we’re looking for.” So I rolled on by the guy at the first steep section, as gracefully and unhurriedly powerfully as an expert rower in a racing scull passing a kid in a paddle boat. (At least, that’s how I convinced myself I looked. I was probably more like a dancing hippo from Fantasia: fluid, and yet somehow pathetic.) I kept this up until things got really steep, and I got further into the red, and no longer had the luxury of pretense. Once out of the saddle, I was thrashing ugly, like Escartin in the early Lance years. God.

We think of roads as having a fixed length, like Pi or the wavelength of Cesium. Of course this is simply untrue. Claremont when you’re fit is pretty long. Claremont when you’re really fit isn’t so very long. Claremont when you’re getting in touch with your inner fat bastard is basically endless. Why, why, why did I do this? And why was I continuing? All the rationalizations (his bow-leggedness, helmetlessness, etc.) popped right into my mind, along with a new one: I’m going to look like a real ass if I falter now, after my big strut; this skinny little bareheaded Doogie Howser is going to laugh inwardly, or maybe even in my face, as he plucks the baton from my generation and leaves me gasping in his wake. I couldn’t let that happen. Maybe I couldn’t prevent that from happening, but I wasn’t going to sit up and welcome it. So I pressed on, absolutely murdering myself.

Then, I had the epiphany. Not “an epiphany,” which is normally how these go, but the same epiphany I have—and then forget—time after time in such situations. The realization is this: though I convince myself that I quit racing because of the time commitment involved, the traveling, the cost, the overall lifestyle and the impact that would have on my family, the truth of the matter is that I’ve had enough of this kind of suffering. Riding is fun, and riding hard is fun but hurts, and riding really hard is fun but really hurts, but racing—officially or in these desperate ego-driven throw-downs—is pure agony. There’s just this huge chasm between anything you can inflict upon yourself in the name of fitness, and this kind of searing, overwhelming pain, a thousand nerve endings crying out at once to try to get the brain to do something, anything, to rescue the organism.

I’d gone past the fine edge of what is tolerable, and every shove on the pedals increased my abject misery. “I don’t want to be here,” I thought. “I don’t want to be doing this. This sucks. Nothing is worse than this.” And yet I kept on, because I’d written a check I could not afford to bounce, because a skinny, duck-footed, helmetless Riccò-type was probably sitting right on me, or hanging just back, deciding how to best punish me for my foolish audacity.

One of the rules of these “pick-up races” (to coin a term) is that you don’t look back at your opponent. I didn’t hear him behind me, and eventually a car approached and I had an excuse to look back. He was maybe 150 feet behind. I looked again, a few minutes later, and he was maybe 200 feet back. A third look showed he was gaining. It definitely seemed he was working on catching me—but here I suddenly had some doubt: what if this entire showdown is in my head, and this dude is just pedaling his bike up the hill, oblivious to my challenge? Could I be locked in a struggle against my own shadow, my own delusion? Could it be that I’m scarcely different from those crazy people you occasionally see on the street having a loud, public argument with—nobody? Fortunately, no one would ever know. Just as modern crazies are camouflaged among all the hands-free cell phone users, I must have looked like any joe having a hard time with a tough climb.

Besides, he must have been trying to catch me. I’ve been riding long enough to know when somebody has taken the bait. I figured I’d know for sure soon enough, as soon as he came by me and accelerated. Except that, amazingly, I was going just fast enough to hold him off. Every time I glanced back, he was somewhere between gaining on me and faltering. Eventually I realized he’d run out of time, and I would make it to the top of Claremont ahead of him—that I’d actually managed to turn a clever bluff into desperation-fueled triumph. Chances were that he’d either go straight, down Fish Ranch, or right, along Skyline. He might even turn around and go back down Claremont. But the horrible possibility existed that he’d go left, like me, and drop my ass on Grizzly Peak. I shuddered at the thought, and made sure I lost no time making my left turn, just in case. I kept it floored until the first switchback, when I looked back to make sure that—oh, crap. He was turning, too, and not wasting any time about it. I’d just had a bunch more tacked onto my sentence.

Funny how the mind works. On the brink of despair, I convinced myself of a lie that, in retrospect, seems like a reasonable truth: if this little pocket climber can’t chase me down on Claremont, where the grade is steep enough to put the laws of physics squarely in his favor, he shouldn’t be able to close the gap on the shallower grade of Grizzly Peak. I even told myself that he himself would be painfully aware of this idea, and might just lose all hope. Of course it felt like a lie at the time, because my entire output was really a myth, like Wile E. Coyote running along in mid-air only because he hasn’t yet realized he’s gone off a cliff. But I willed myself to believe it, and kept the hurt on, abusing myself so badly that it almost started to feel normal, and, one pedal stroke at a time, I finally reached the part of the climb, near the steam trains, where it starts to really ease up.

Guido handed me a pistol and said, “Here—finish him.” So I threw her in the big ring. Not because I was going so fast I’d run out of small cogs or anything, but because you can’t have a Big Ring Tale without the big ring, and I was already sensing the first stirrings of this story you’re now reading. Meanwhile, with the end in sight I suddenly felt like I had a little more energy in store than I’d thought. In fact, my full awareness of how badly this had hurt was already beginning to recede, and now it is a feat of imagination for me to remember how very badly I suffered in the pursuit of this minor, possibly delusional, victory over a single nameless foe.

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